Friday, 18 May 2012

I’d like to tell you to my fraud experience. I went to Taiwan with my friend last summer. We wanted to go to the famous place. When we were walking around to find the bus stop, we were spoken by a man. He was a taxi driver. He said if you want to go there, you could go by taxi cheaper than bus. We decided to go there by taxi because we believed him. He said we would arrive soon but it took about 1 hour and we paid $50. When we were looking around the place, we met some Japanese and we told them that. They taught us it was fraud!! Oh my got… They taught us how to get the bus. We could get back only $8!! It took just 15min. The taxi driver deceived us. Be careful.

6 comments:

  1. haha don't believe taxi driver in abroad!! usually bus is cheaper than taxi.

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    1. noah I learned that! I'll be careful when I catch a taxi!

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  2. that bad but you have to see the positive side is that you learn to be more careful

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    1. gerardo yaah! It was a bad experience but it taught me to be careful!!

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  3. Interesting story! I am glad that you were able to learn from the experience.

    Here are a few suggestions for phrasing/grammar

    "I'd like to tell you ABOUT my experience with fraud"

    "They TOLD us that it was fraud"

    "Oh my GOD"

    "They taught us how to CATCH the bus"

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    1. I become to pay attention anything when i go to new spots.
      Anyway thank you for telling my mistakes!!

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